tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post2850306327395144877..comments2024-03-06T08:35:34.964-07:00Comments on N. R. Williams, Fantasy Author: Write, Edit, Publish. Horrible Harvest, Stolen TearsN. R. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-10571763504627448092022-03-03T23:18:10.599-07:002022-03-03T23:18:10.599-07:00top ten logistics company in india
top logistics c...<a href="https://omlogistics.co.in/" rel="nofollow">top ten logistics company in india</a><br /><a href="https://omlogistics.co.in/" rel="nofollow">top logistics companies in delhi</a> premier logistics service provider with a strong focus on customer satisfaction.logistics service in indiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01070972268783859347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-79047190035052323552019-10-27T08:27:52.314-06:002019-10-27T08:27:52.314-06:00Hi Nancy - I do hope the surgery went as well as c...Hi Nancy - I do hope the surgery went as well as can be expected and you're now healing. <br /><br />I hope the faeries can revive their life ... and Lilith stays away ... as I suspect she still has powers perhaps through the boy ... I enjoyed the take - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-35003475623347864142019-10-21T14:20:59.114-06:002019-10-21T14:20:59.114-06:00Nastiness breeding evil seems to be a theme that y...Nastiness breeding evil seems to be a theme that yields fruit - or worse. Cleverly crafted, Nancy. My gut feeling is to dislike Lilith, but you hint at a disturbing backstory. Like The Joker?<br /><br />But abuse is not justification. Or is it? The cat murder twist adds to the Horrible. Roland Clarkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03302133565980901397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-60628603312894903332019-10-20T08:13:51.778-06:002019-10-20T08:13:51.778-06:00A chilling faerie tale, Nancy. Lilith got her reve...A chilling faerie tale, Nancy. Lilith got her revenge in the end, but at what cost? I'm sorry for the poor innocent child who was turned by Lilith harvesting his tears. Truly sad. But fitting for the theme this month.<br />I've been following your surgery/rehab on FB. Hope you're home soon and feeling great. Thanks for posting this at what must have been a stressful time.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-57716818206052423402019-10-19T20:53:57.083-06:002019-10-19T20:53:57.083-06:00Very vengeful--excellent work! Perfect feel for Ha...Very vengeful--excellent work! Perfect feel for Halloween. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-51700055782130321822019-10-19T10:30:20.987-06:002019-10-19T10:30:20.987-06:00A rather psycho fae that should have been locked f...A rather psycho fae that should have been locked far away in a hole. Great story indeed, and now she seems to be seeping into the human world.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-1633799414495036952019-10-19T05:42:23.161-06:002019-10-19T05:42:23.161-06:00A great story. Hope you are recovering well from ...A great story. Hope you are recovering well from your surgery. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-22965638160619153632019-10-18T19:37:05.899-06:002019-10-18T19:37:05.899-06:00She certainly got her revenge, and it seems her ch...She certainly got her revenge, and it seems her chaos will continue in the human world as well. Definitely a tale fitting for Halloween!L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-31997700097846451262019-10-18T08:00:49.633-06:002019-10-18T08:00:49.633-06:00Something tells me that the boy was the baby whose...Something tells me that the boy was the baby whose tears she took.The fairies were right in exiling her.Bernadettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02702896194225013297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-67734527307887329542019-10-18T04:21:55.326-06:002019-10-18T04:21:55.326-06:00Hi,
Revenge destroys and it passes along or is tr...Hi,<br /><br />Revenge destroys and it passes along or is transmitted in the baby where she got the tears from. <br />I was surpised that the action of her stealing the tears had a horrible effect on the baby. <br /><br />Shalom aleichem and get well soon. <br /><br />Pat GPat Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204650731843984192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-53660523675245283902019-10-18T03:22:53.543-06:002019-10-18T03:22:53.543-06:00Fascinating story. I enjoyed how the tears were cr...Fascinating story. I enjoyed how the tears were crystallised and then turned to poison. There was something satisfying in her revenge for being ostracised. Nicely done. <br />All the best for your surgery. Kalpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02503951641129389045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-69477253242140832192019-10-17T18:50:51.227-06:002019-10-17T18:50:51.227-06:00This is kind of sad, and yes horrible, in the perf...This is kind of sad, and yes horrible, in the perfect way for telling a compelling story. The village fae were horrible, Lilith was horrible, and the child was horrible. It's a truly nasty cycle. <br />Great entry. Thanks for sharing it. Toi Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493934864387695248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-17408911317074955042019-10-17T11:17:23.744-06:002019-10-17T11:17:23.744-06:00I don't like Lilith - a truly nasty personage....I don't like Lilith - a truly nasty personage. Her village fae were right to exile her. They should've imprisoned her, restricting her movements. Would've been safer for them, poor schmucks. And the kid killing a cat in the end - horror indeed. Olga Godimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00358026814685611301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-16996465236634439872019-10-17T08:46:59.833-06:002019-10-17T08:46:59.833-06:00Yikes! A truly nasty end - tears are indeed powerf...Yikes! A truly nasty end - tears are indeed powerful!!<br />Hope you're feeling better!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-2453106893755897672019-10-17T04:12:01.725-06:002019-10-17T04:12:01.725-06:00The creation of the seed, the planting and the har...The creation of the seed, the planting and the harvesting - perfect. A horrible harvest indeed. The ending line is truly chilling.<br /><br />Thank you for writing for this Challenge, especially with a medical procedure scheduled. Hope your surgery has gone smoothly and wish you a quick recovery.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-5146636341308698462019-10-08T09:38:36.801-06:002019-10-08T09:38:36.801-06:00Thanks Elephant.Thanks Elephant.N. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09657971290030200313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4515938238151905083.post-72377467219133586592019-10-06T23:21:57.378-06:002019-10-06T23:21:57.378-06:00Truly nasty. And the final sentence suggests the ...Truly nasty. And the final sentence suggests the nastiness continues.<br />I hope your surgery goes well - and that your recovery is quick and complete.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com