Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Hump Day Improvisation, my sentence.

Below, today’s post issued a challenge to create a sentence about depression. As promised, here is my sentence.

Sorrow could not measure her pain. She struggled with the knowledge, with the hurt, with…there were no words.

Tomorrow I will post about the Halloween party. I know many of you are looking forward to that.

Next week there is a blog fest to write from an animal’s POV. Here’s the link.

6 comments:

Clarissa Draper said...

That's a really cool sentence.

CD

Jeffrey Beesler said...

I could so totally feel her pain just with the words you chose in this sentence. Well done.

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Clarissa and Jeffrey. You are both so kind.
Nancy

Quinn said...

I love how you can get so much emotion into one sentence. Great job!

Jules said...

Wonderful description of depression :) Well, if depression can be wonderful :D

Thanks for commenting yesterday.
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Quinn and Jules. I appreciate your comments.
Nancy