Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Hump Day Improvisation: My sentences.

Hunger saturated every inch of his being, gnawing on carrots didn’t quell the ever present need for blood. White fangs thrust forth at the first site of the delectable creature that just sat in an open convertible and started the engine.

Do you like my very first attempt at vampires? I think I just found my monster for Friday’s post.

11 comments:

Joanne said...

Whoever's in that convertible, should put that top up! Quick!

N. R. Williams said...

You're right on that one Joanne. LOL
Nancy

Clarissa Draper said...

I really love this series and try to participate in it but this week my parents are here and it's a bit rushed in my house.

CD

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you for the nice compliment Clarissa. Enjoy your parents.
Nancy

Summer Ross said...

I really liked the use of the word "delectable" That was great!

Melissa said...

A vampire with carrots??? I am so in love.

Jules said...

I think I'll keep my windows up and the doors looked. :)
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Summer, Melissa and Jules for leaving a comment.
Nancy

Holly Ruggiero said...

That was fun! Hum, does that make me weird?

Patricia Stoltey said...

Vampires and I do not get along at all. :)

N. R. Williams said...

Thanks Summer and Patricia for leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed my sentences.
Nancy