Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Hump Day Improvistation, my sentences.

Here are my sentences.

Agony crept along her brainstem, highlighted by an unknown source. Electricity gathered at its center, burned through her thoughts and left behind the ashes of existence.

Thanks for your participation.


Summer Ross said...

That's really well put and interesting to read.

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Summer.

Jeffrey Beesler said...

That's an excellent sentence, especially at the end with the ashes. Well done.

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jeffrey, yours was great as well.