Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Hump Day Improvisation: My sentences.

The outer room tilted until I slipped within. I knew I dreamt but couldn’t wake myself, so I didn’t resist the sway of my thoughts as I made my way in this altered universe.
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4 comments:

Jeff Beesler said...

Excellent sentences, Nancy! Well done!

November 3, 2010 at 7:26 PM
N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jeffrey.
NR

November 3, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Jules said...

Wow, I hope I don't have that dream. I'd be dizzy for weeks. :)

Great job, NR :D
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

November 4, 2010 at 6:21 AM
N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jules. I appreciate the compliment.
NR

November 4, 2010 at 9:31 AM

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