Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Hump Day Improvisation: My sentences.

The outer room tilted until I slipped within. I knew I dreamt but couldn’t wake myself, so I didn’t resist the sway of my thoughts as I made my way in this altered universe.

4 comments:

Jeffrey Beesler said...

Excellent sentences, Nancy! Well done!

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jeffrey.
NR

Jules said...

Wow, I hope I don't have that dream. I'd be dizzy for weeks. :)

Great job, NR :D
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jules. I appreciate the compliment.
NR