Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Hump Day Improvisation: My sentences

As promised here are my sentences.

“All aboard,” Jack cried out. He snapped the reins and his horse team, Merry & Weather; pulled the sleigh in the deepening snow. The branches above dusted the tourist and Jack with snow. Deer gazed at the group, more interested in rummaging for food at the ranch then anything else. Jack would be thrilled when the days activities ended since his feet and fingers were numb from the cold.

A sleigh ride is on my bucket list. I’ve always wanted to go on one

6 comments:

Mary Vaughn said...

Went on a sleigh ride years and would love to go again. It can be fun, romantic or both. Great experience. Try it by all means.

N. R. Williams said...

I definitely will Mary. Thanks for stopping back.
NR

Jeffrey Beesler said...

Excellent sentences, Nancy! My hands got cold through the power of suggestion as I read them! Better turn up the heat or put on gloves, huh?

N. R. Williams said...

LOL Jeffrey. Thank for coming back and reading my sentences.
NR

Marian Allen said...

Love your sentences, Nancy! I really got into Jack's head. Loved the juxtaposition of the beauty and romance the tourist must be experiencing and the all-in-a-day's-work attitude of Jack--and the deer! lol!

Marian Allen

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Marian.
NR