As promised here are my sentences.
“All aboard,” Jack cried out. He snapped the reins and his horse team, Merry & Weather; pulled the sleigh in the deepening snow. The branches above dusted the tourist and Jack with snow. Deer gazed at the group, more interested in rummaging for food at the ranch then anything else. Jack would be thrilled when the days activities ended since his feet and fingers were numb from the cold.
A sleigh ride is on my bucket list. I’ve always wanted to go on one