Thursday, January 6, 2011

The Treasures of Carmelidrium, Synopsis

The first synopsis I wrote was very different. Then I updated it and posted it here as well as in my pages based on information I received. After I reviewed that synopsis on the e-book blurb, I learned that you only had 400 characters available to you. Thus a new synopsis that I hope readers will find enticing enough to buy my book.

When a hooded man steps in front of her car, Missie is thrust through a portal into a medieval world where she encounters monsters and mythical creatures. Here her flute has magical powers to heal and destroy and to empower, "The Treasures of Carmelidrium." She is romanced by a prince and hunted by the villain. Will she find her way home? Does she want to?

Below is my blog book tour. I will be giving away 3 e-books just for leaving a comment during the tour along with your email address so I can contact you. I hope you will follow me. I'm suspending all my other post during the tour except for the Sunday Bible Study.

N. R. Williams (Nancy)


Misha said...

Sounds fascinating. Love the new look btw. :-)

Joanne said...

I like the idea of trimming a synopsis down like this. It has a great way of bringing out the energy of the book, great job! Best wishes on the tour, and Happy New Year to you :)

Summer Ross said...

Interesting Blurb. I think it will work out well for you.

Holly Ruggiero said...

I like the new look too. It must be tough to make a little synopsis. But it’s enticing.

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Misha.

Trim and tight as they say Joanna.

Thank you Summer.

I think the hardest thing for a writer, Holly, is to craft a short description after months or years of creating the actual book.

I appreciate all your comments.

Helen Ginger said...

I think the blurb sounds enticing. If the reader likes fantasy, it will draw her in.

gideon 86 said...

Yah, Nancy,

I really like our synopsis.... Well done. Good luck tomorrow. I am so happy for you...


N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Helen and Michael. I hope the reader does like the description. And tomorrow is almost here Michael.

Thank you both for dropping in and leaving a comment.

The Golden Eagle said...

I like the new synopsis! It's very intriguing.

erica and christy said...

:0) Very exciting! Our post tomorrow (the 7th) is for you!!!! Best of luck on your tour! We'll be following! christy

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Golden.

That is great of both of you Erica and Christy. What a surprise.

Thanks so much for dropping in Golden, Erica and Christy. I appreciate it so much.

Jules said...

I jumped straight to this comment form, don't want to skew my rating :) I'm so hoping your sales freeze amazon up :)
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Jules. I hope you're right.

Donna Hole said...

Cool blurb.

Good luck on your Blog tour.


N. R. Williams said...

Thank you Donna.