June introduces us to a new Write, Edit, Publish
Challenge. I’d like to thank Denise Covey and her team of awesome writers,
Laura, Nilanjana and Olga for their combined efforts in running this bloghop.
Well done ladies.
The challenge this month is Caged Bird. Tell a story
in 1,000 words or less. Post pictures or a poem. Good luck to everyone who is
submitting their work. And for other writers reading, it’s not too late to
participate.
For my story of Caged Bird, it continues the saga of
Primrose. If you haven’t read about Primrose yet, you can read the two stories
I’ve already posted below, Stealing Pearls followed by Primrose and Anvil. Or, you can click on Faerie Tales in the pages above and read all three in order. Her
story will be completed next month, so be sure to come back.
Caged
Bird
Primrose twirled, her faerie wings flapping hard. The
ruby and emeralds embedded in her forehead and cheek caught the moonlight that
reflected off the human lake. Her giggles floated above her like bubbles in
multiple colors. She touched down, tipping her toes in the waters as she danced
in the middle of the lake.
She
was safe, at night, in the massive forest. There were human cabins here and
there, but none were close. She waited until the humans were all in bed and if
anyone was camping, she flew to the opposite side of the lake.
Her
tight curls were in the shape and color of primroses. Her faerie dress tonight
was midnight blue. She’d come here by accident the first time. When she flew
from the faerie portal, she’d said “trees” and ended in the middle of this huge
forest. The trees even dwarfed the humans. Curious, she came every day for two
weeks until she found the lake, which she named, ‘Glorious Pond.’ In order to
return to it from the portal the lake must have a name.
Not
that it was a pond. No, it was a lake that stretched for leagues.
She
swallowed a few giggles which made her giddy with happiness. Then she noticed
movement by the shore. She stopped and hovered mid-air. Whatever it had been
was gone. Probably a deer. She’d seen a herd of the beasts earlier and landed
on the nose of one of them. It sneezed and she flew up, laughed and touched her
wand to its forehead. The deer reared from the ground before crashing back
down.
There
was only one drawback to the lake and forest. No one brought their precious
items from home. She’d inspected all the cabins. No jewelry boxes, no bracelets,
necklaces, earrings or anything else. One cabin had an impressive display of
fishing lures, but they didn’t tempt her.
Something
shiny caught her eye in a tree close to the beach where she’d seen the deer.
Curiosity floated up her faerie limbs until it reached her nose. She tweaked the
tip of her nose and then flew across the waters to the shore.
The
shiny thing seemed to float just under a tree limb. Primrose looked this way
and then that. No humans, no deer. A raccoon crept out on the other side of the
shore. Somewhere, a terrible stench reached her. It must be a skunk.
I’m
safe. She flew toward the shiny object to discover a metal bird cage. The dome
of the cage came down and was secured in a wooden base. Is it iron or copper?
Inside the cage was a bar
held up with links to the top. Once, in her travels to this human world, she’d
seen a bird cage and she knew that the creatures would perch on the bar. She
tapped it to test that the metal wasn’t iron. All faeries hated iron.
The door to the cage
lifted up to expose an opening. Primrose flew inside. She stood on the bar,
then sat and began to swing. Her laughter pinged against the metal making
music. Then a bang. She flew from the bar and turned. The door had slammed
shut.
Fear sped along her
nerves. She flew to the door and tapped it with her wand. A dull thud told her
the horrible news. It was made of iron. She couldn’t get out.
A loud noise caused her
to cringe and cover her ears. Voices. “Look.” “We got it.” Two children
arrived. A boy and girl.
“Oh, see how pretty she
is?” The girl said.
“I’ll feed it to my
praying mantis.” The boy grinned.
“Better not.”
The boy took the cage
down and handed it to the girl. “What will you tell mom?”
“I’ll hide her.”
“She’ll find it sooner or
later, Gretta.”
Gretta slugged her
brother in the arm which caused the cage to move with violent force and even
turn over. Primrose was thrown around like a pile of seeds. When it was over,
one of her wings was torn. The pain made her gasp.
“Be very quiet.” Gretta
had her face close to the cage and peered in at her. “Oh, you’re hurt. How do I
fix it?”
Primrose stepped as close
to the cage bars as possible. “You can’t fix it. Let me go.”
Gretta’s face pinched
with a frown and pressed lips and then changed to a grin. “You can talk. What
are you?”
“I am faerie. If you
don’t let me go, others will come and curse you.” She knew they wouldn’t curse
the children or any human, but Primrose herself would be in big trouble.
“What’s a curse?”
“That’s when my kind
changes you into a fish.”
The child opened a cabin
door. It was dark inside. Her brother led her up the stairs. His flashlight
illumined wooden walls, a deer head, a door and a bedroom. Gretta turned on the
light as her brother left and shut the door. The bright glare of the overhead
fixture blinded Primrose for a moment.
Gretta knelt, and shoved
the cage under her bed. “You have to sleep now. Tomorrow we’ll play.”
A moment later, the light
off, Primrose heard Gretta climb into bed, cover herself and whisper something
against her pillow.
Primrose lay down on the
wooden floor of the cage discouraged. Perhaps something would come to her in
the morning and she’d free herself.
Word Count 909
Did you like this story? Feedback is always appreciated.
Nancy
To read other stories submitted for this challenge, go
here.
35 comments:
I do like hearing more of Primrose's story. Ouch on the torn wing, and I hope that Gretta isn't as thoughtless as she appears. Her initial wanting to help gives me hope.
Thank you, Elephant's Child. Small children tend to think only of themselves. I will post the conclusion next month.
Nancy
Yikes! I hope she is able to escape. The only thing worse than being trapped by a thoughtless child would be being trapped by a willfully cruel adult.
The final installment of Primroses's story is next month, Real. Come back to learn how it ends. And, thanks for coming by.
Nancy
A lovely story Nancy. Always a little snag with Primrose. I’m glad she wasn’t fed to the praying mantis. What will Gretta do with her in the morning? Looking forward to seeing the final episode.
Primrose gets into the most interesting problems. Dixie Jarchow
Thank you, Denise.
Edix, she causes her problems, of course.
Thank you both for coming by.
Nancy
I just read parts 1-3. anvil with a shape of an anvil for his hair - that's cute. though I really don't like how primrose sweet-talk anvil into fixing the jewelry box - that's a very human thing to do. perhaps her visits to the human world is affecting her?
it's sad that primrose got captured, I hope she gets out of it somehow. maybe a sympathizing human will save her.
have a lovely day.
p.s. it's a bit strange you have no post titles, you can't make direct post links without them. I'm just so used to seeing them on blogs...
Poor Primrose - trapped and with a torn wing! Looking forward to the next bit - hope she figures out how to get gree!
Thanks Iissa and Jemi.
Post titles. I think I forgot. I'll have to mend that.
Nancy
I like your story and the descriptions. Sad ending but a glimmer of hope. More promised. Primrose is a learner but innocent as well. Her character works. Good use of the prompt.
Hi,
Interesting! Primrose's curiosity got the best of her and she walked into a trap.
The sadness comes in knowing that she is now trapped. It is a cage for her and I wonder how long can she live in that cage.
Very well written.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat G
Poor Primrose to get caught like that. I guess she had never encountered the treacherous humans before. Hope she could get out soon.
Lovely writing. I do hope Primrose recovers from her injury and is able to escape.
Hi Nancy - what a lovely take ... I do hope Primrose gets free - just seems she'll have to do some clever talking or get lucky ... well done - fun - cheers Hilar4y
I'm so enjoying the Primrose story. She's in quite a bind right now and I can't wait to see how she gets out of it.
Kids can be cruel without knowing it sometimes. Hopefully she breaks free.
This is beautiful Nancy. I have missed your fairy tales!
Oh dear. Children can be so cruel. I hope Primrose manages to escape without being harmed.
Poor Primrose! To me the brother sounds more scary and cruel than Gretta. I hope she can find a way to keep him away from the faery.
I always enjoy your flashes about Primrose - look forward to reading about how she gets free. Great use of the prompt. Thanks for a lovely, magical read.
Thank you for coming by and all the wonderful comments; Roland, Pat, Olga, Sally, Hilary, Toi, Pat, Donna, Operation and Nila.
Be sure to return in August.
Cheers,
Nancu
I do like your fairy stories. I hope Primrose recovers from her injury and is able to find her way home.
Thank you, Sally.
Nancy
A fantastic, imaginative tale. Well done.
Oh no, a broken wing! Wonderfully written.
I'm glad we get to read more about Primrose, and I enjoyed your take on the prompt. I do hope she finds a way out of that cage!
Thank you, Christopher. I do love spreading my writer wings.
Thank you, Carrie Ann. We will see what befalls Primrose next month.
Thank you, L.G. come back in August for the finale of Primrose.
I appreciate every ones comment.
It will be interesting to see how Primrose gets herself out of this. Nice story.
Thank you, Bernadette.
Oh no! Poor Primrose! I had a bad feeling when she went into that thing. I thought maybe it would be a lobster trap or something. But oh man, a cage with iron? She obviously didn't check it well enough. And a torn wing? Poor dear!
I look forward to the next part!
Thanks J. Lenni.
Nancy
Nice idea to tie several stories about Primrose together, though this story ends without a happy resolution. There's a sharp contrast between the fairy's innocence and the children's plot to catch and keep her. I'm left wondering where their innocence went. And Primrose will get into trouble for getting caged? Definitely makes this reader want to turn the page! Beth
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Poor Primrose! Curiosity killed the cat? I hope she manages to rescue herself, and maybe teach those kids some things about kindness and compassion.
Thank you, Beth and Rebecca.
Primrose is as mischievous as you can get. Tune in in July for the conclusion of her story.
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